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I see your face
Through the window
It's just how
I remember it

And I watched you slip away
back to your space
I cant reach you
From outside

I see your face
Through my tears
It's not how
You remember this

And I watch you slip away
Further away
From me
Just becasue
©2006-2009 ~renegade-shadow
:iconrenegade-shadow:

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this is a song i wrote. so that why it seems to be just a bunch of words without much structure.

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:iconmakanut:
wow thats good,
who is slipping away from you?

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Thanx Dan [link]
:peace: MAKANUT :mangapunksai:
:iconrenegade-shadow:
no one really in particular. just an idea/concept i had.
:iconsilkenrose:
i like it...
*hug*

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"We will beat the bastards over the head with broomsticks if we have to." - Winston Churchill (We will fight them on the beaches' speech)
:icon31enrose36:
I really like the sort of repetition in here... it's a wonderful song... erm... poem that could be a song. You know. ^_^ Nice work again.

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All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.
- Edgar Allan Poe
:iconrenegade-shadow:
heh yeah thanks.

its a pity DA has the whole thing against music on here. otherwise i would get mp3's up :p
:icon31enrose36:
Yes... that is pretty sad. But it's so much easier for people to steal work that way.

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All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.
- Edgar Allan Poe

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